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A Hedgehog's Adventure Ch. 4 by *raypbrooks:iconraypbrooks:





A Hedgehog’s Adventure

Chapter 4: The Snakes in the Shadows

Stealth. This is an ability that many can attempt, some can perform, and only few can master. It is an ability that allows someone to refrain from being noticed by his enemies. To blend in with whatever places there are to hide. This can help if you are trying to retrieve something of great importance, but in this case he was trying to keep an eye on someone who was of a Very Great Importance and this opens another chapter.


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As the two captives and the guards moving them went out of sight, the red eyes moved back in the shadowy hallway and moved through a hole in the roof.

He checked surroundings. Nothing in sight; but that didn’t mean it was completely unguarded. He quickly traversed the rooftops of the abandoned sections of the base, always keeping the two hedgehogs in sight.

By the looks of things he needed to hurry to get in a good place to attack before they reached the inner areas with higher security.

He kept looking until he found a small alleyway with a good placement to destroy the robots, but not the captives.

However they would be a few minutes until they arrived so he decided to see how his partner was doing. He didn’t like working with others. He preferred to work alone and not worry about anyone else. However he had not known much about this person, and so far his impressions were he could handle himself.

“How’s the system hack coming?”

“Terrible. This is a really tough nut to crack. I don’t even know how Eggman gets in even with a password.”

“Hmph. Well keep trying. We need to get in there.”

“I’m trying, I’m trying. I might take a few more minutes. Anything new in that section.”

“Yes. I’ve spotted the two hedgehog’s being escorted through this section to the central area.”

“Right on time I see….wait. Did you say Two hedgehogs?”

“Yes.”
“That can’t be right. I thought Eggman only captured Amy.”

“Well it appears the “Good Old Doctor” has been hog-hunting.”

“Really. I didn’t know it was in season. I hope the next one’s not chameleon.”

“This is no time for smart remarks you lizard. Now how is that system coming? I’m about to get a clear shot at the guards near the two hedgehogs”

“Alright. I think I found an opening in the security.”

“The hedgehog’s and their two guards are here. There’s one guard in front and one behind.”

“You may destroy when ready”

“Affirmative”

“I’m almost there…..wait.”

The hedgehog powered up two of his traditional Chaos Spears. “You can consider them scrapped.”

“WAIT. SHADOW. DON’T.”

At the last second he stopped the energy flow and slammed the two Chaos Spears into the ground. It made a huge impact and shockwave that most of the patrolling guards heard it. Shadow immediately jumped up on the roof and ran for a water tower where he had cover, but could see the group.

The robots guarding them were pointing the guns at the exploded alleyway. Many others had joined them and were inspecting the explosion.

Shadow then called his partner. “Just What Are You Trying To DO!!!? Get me killed!!!”

“Sorry Shadow. I was just blocked off the system.”

“You were what.”

“We can’t get in.”

“Humph! Why did even agree to this mission with you Espio.”

“Because you were ordered too”

“Grrr…”
“Anyway, what’s Plan B, Shadow?”

“If you mean getting in undetected, there’s no plan.”

“But we could still sneak in behind the robots escorting the hedgehogs.”

“There is too much security now. There are three times as many robots”

“So were Screwed I guess.”

“Well, Yes and No.”

“Hmm…?”

“We can still warp in, but we will be automatically detected. He’s upgraded his security since my last visit.”

“Then what do we do?”

“We need a distraction.”

“How big of a distraction?”

“A Full-on frontal assault.”

“Oh. So now what?”

“We wait.”

“Wait? For what?”

*BOOM*

“That.”

“WHAT WAS THAT?  MY NEW Laptop’s broken!”

“….”

“….”


“…….The Faker.”
©2009-2010 *raypbrooks
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Author's Comments

Well after another long time here's another chapter this one introduces Shadow and Espio and I think all intro chapters are completed. Next one is full action and after that the REAL story begins. Enjoy!

Anyway here's another dedication. I dedicate this chapter to :iconlu-raziel:. She is a good friend and a superb artist and writer. Her major series is "The Return of Maria Robotnick"It is an excellent series and I recommend you read it.:)

It will be a while till the next chapter because of School, but remember to please look forward to it. I also appreciate comments and feedback for any improvement.:):pat::)

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:iconxx-amaramis-xx:
Helllllo! Another chapter!

Espio lost his laptop. How very upsetting.

Nice! Sometimes you inject a capital wehn it isn't necessary, but that aside, grammar and spelling is very good! Hmm...I like the references to hunting seaons, genius.

Awesome, can't wait to see more! Would you mind leaving a comment or so on my stuff? I love you faving, but I'm not always sure why you do.

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OMG, I came up with that by myself!! :D
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:iconraypbrooks:
Thank you very much and that part just came to me. Thanks for the advice and of course. I'll be sure to comment. I'm really enjoying the Song of the Siren roleplay.

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:iconxx-amaramis-xx:
Glad to hear it!

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Imagination is freedom!
OMG, I came up with that by myself!! :D
Oh yeah, flaming is for the kitchen, not the internet
Check out my Sonic Fancharacter fic here - [link]
:iconraypbrooks:
:)

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"I am extremely grateful for last-minute luck. Thank you to whoever gave me that luck"

Sonic should not be hated. The only reason you should hate Sonic is if you hate chili dogs.
However if you like chili dogs,support and respect Sonic for good taste.
:iconctoonfan1:
Now Shadow and Espio are in it! This keeps getting better and better!

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:iconraypbrooks:
Yes it does. The next chapter should be longer and set the plot Properly for things to come.:):pat::)

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"I am extremely grateful for last-minute luck. Thank you to whoever gave me that luck"

Sonic should not be hated. The only reason you should hate Sonic is if you hate chili dogs.
However if you like chili dogs,support and respect Sonic for good taste.
:icontrixieprower:
Suspenseful. =D
Good job Ray! ^^

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:iconraypbrooks:
Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed this picture.:):pat::)

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"I am extremely grateful for last-minute luck. Thank you to whoever gave me that luck"

Sonic should not be hated. The only reason you should hate Sonic is if you hate chili dogs.
However if you like chili dogs,support and respect Sonic for good taste.
:icontruekaoz:
Very nice chapter indeed, I like the idea of Espio and Shadow working together, I guess it's the similarities in personality which work well.

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